Another post for the BlogFlash2012 Challenge! And the third post today! Gosh, I’m easily distracted from uni work…
Ah well. Let me know what you think of this (predictably dark) flash fiction.
Go back to the start of the Challenge here.
…Busy…
“No” was a recurring word in her vocabulary.
“No, babe, I’ve got to finish this report.”
“No, hon’, I start work early tomorrow.”
“I’m too busy—I said no.”
“That’s okay,” he said pleasantly. Then he picked up the fire iron and brought it down across her shoulders, her back, her constantly shaking head.
He couldn’t help but laugh when each swing caused her to cry out, predictably, “NO! No no no no no…”
- Love The Bad Guy
How do you do that? 6 lines and I’m already picking my jaw up!
Haha, thank you muchly, Lizzie!
These short stories are fitting perfectly into my BUSY schedule (see what I did there?), so I’m happy to know their briefness isn’t affecting the quality too badly.
Hyuck hyuck I saw what you did thurr. Well you’re doing wonderfully. In fact, you’re on a frickin’ run yo! (Sorry, I’ve been watching Breaking Bad) I don’t know how you do it!
‘Til next post Milady!
I didn’t see that coming! Thank you so much for the twist!