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Some readers have already guessed where this story originated, and this voice should definitely help with that — the gloves are off, and some names are mentioned.
If you wish to go back to Part One, click here. Comments and constructive criticism always welcome.
.. Hell Beneath Us ..
As fleet as thought and bound by duty, I delve into the shadows in search of spring’s maiden.
The lifelessness of the Underworld has become an eerie, horrifying reflection of the mortal earth above; cut off from Demeter’s bounty, all has withered and died. The urgency of my mission brings renewed courage to my heart, though my hands quiver still.
She is not difficult to find; the Dark Ruler has no intention of hiding his prize, and has instead positioned her proudly beside his throne. The depthlessness of his gaze brings me pause, for a moment, but I am safe in the service of the supreme ruler.
My message is delivered, and through some miracle, Hades obeys. He takes his wife in his arms, and I watch as she is consumed fully by his cloak of shadow. But then her hand is in mine, and together we seek the light.
- Love The Bad Guy
I do love how you’re telling this story. I can’t remember who retrieves Persephone, but I thought of Hermes when I read this. He was the messenger of the gods, wasn’t he?
Nail on the head.
I’m glad you’re enjoying the story.
All three are beautiful!
Thank you very much!
Fascinating collection of viewpoints to retell a well-known story in a new way! I love the first line of this third one!
Thank you! I’ve been having a lot of fun playing with this oft-told tale, and bringing a slightly new perspective on it.
I think this voice is the most elegant – and my favorite so far. Beautiful.
Why, thank you. This voice was Zeus’ messenger, Hermes, so I decided to make him slightly more innocent rather than awe-inspiring, which let me play around the tone a little more than the previous two. I’m glad you liked!
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He’s definitely god-like in his presence. And clearly has some power over Hades
Power through association.
Thank you for taking the time to comment.
I have to say that I’m a huge fan of your style. This piece is as beatifully written and profound as the previous to.
And, damn! I need to brush up on my mythology again!
=)
Thank you very much.
I’m glad you’re enjoying the story.
lovely line this – “But then her hand is in mine, and together we seek the light.”
Thanks Parul. I’m glad you liked it.
Ah… and there we have it, the clarity of premise.
That said however, this is a great interpretation and I’ve liked reading all the parts thus far, will now be moving on to the next to see what you do with it!
Cheers.
Thank you! At this midway point, I was happy to clarify the story. I’m glad you liked this voice.