“Phoenix”

Good morrow, fair readers. I’ve another Trifecta post for you today. The challenge is to use the third definition of their prompt word:

TIME (noun)

3a : an appointed, fixed, or customary moment or hour for something to
happen, begin, or end <arrived ahead of time>

b : an opportune or suitable moment <decided it was time to retire>
—often used in the phrase about time <about time for a change>

This short story is one that I posted back in 2011, but I’m rather fond of it, so I gave it a tweaking to present it to a new audience.

Comment and critiques always welcome.

.: Phoenix :.

Happy, smiling faces are neither happy nor smiling once they start to burn.

The flames dance joyfully up the walls as I finger the ashy remains of the photographs, smearing black soot across my palms. My daughter’s laughing eyes; my son’s cheeky smile—their pictures disappear as quickly as they themselves.

Smoke fills my lungs and my hair begins to burn as I cup the ashes in my quivering fists.

I burned it all, but that’s okay.

Our time will soon come, and we shall rise from the ashes.

- Love The Bad Guy

Trifecta Writing Challenge

“Bell”

Time for another 33-word challenge and this time, Trifecta was looking for something a little more serious:

This weekend, we want you to give us a thirty-three response using the word
stone as one of your thirty-three words.  You can use any
definition of the word
that you’d like, but we are specifically looking for

serious, well-conceived entries.

Here’s my response; as always, comments and constructive criticism will be gratefully received.

Bell

Dark, cold, and as impenetrable as stone;
…………………..coffins were not meant to be seen from the inside.

………He clutched at the string and prayed that someone…
………………………………………………………………………………………….anyone…
……………………………………………………………………………………………..would hear the bell’s saving grace.

- Love The Bad Guy

P.S. If this makes NO sense to you, I recommend you seek out the Wikipedia Gods

Trifecta Writing Challenge

“Webbed”

5/03/2013 EDIT: Thank you to anyone who voted for Webbed. I’m glad to say it won third place!
My first bronze medal over at Trifecta!

I do so love Trifecta’s 33 word challenges — I have plenty of time to squeeze one into my schedule, and they’re so much fun to write!

This week’s challenge was:

For the weekend challenge we’re asking for exactly thirty-three
words written in
first person narrative. Have fun with it!

This round is community-judged, so if you enjoy it, I hope you’ll consider popping by the site and giving me your vote.

Cheers!

Webbed

And so it was that love was to be my undoing.

She drew me in closer, wearing her voracious, venomous smile. I, ever the fool, died happily beneath her with an adoring heart.

- Love The Bad Guy

Trifecta Writing Challenge

“Child”

Time for another Trifecta Challenge, and this week, it’s a really tough one:

What we want you to do is to scour the 33rd page of one of
our very favorite books, Elizabeth Strout’s Olive Kitteridge.
Choose 33 words, and reshape those words into a piece of your own.

I struggled with this challenge, and I’m not 100% happy with the result, but I nonetheless offer it up for your musings, comments and criticisms.

Child

He was hollow-boned.

No.

Panic, lapping, ripping, there. His mind was gone.

Never.

She was peering at him. Her wild umbrage wrapped around him.

Then she was gone.

To have a child…?

No…

 

- Love The Bad Guy

Trifecta Writing Challenge

“Mercy”

Time for another Trifecta Challenge:

For this weekend’s challenge we’re asking you to include some hyperbole in
your piece.  It doesn’t have to be the whole piece, but it needs to be in there,
and we’re looking for 33 words, as usual.

Here’s my response; hope you enjoy!

Mercy

Blood oozed sickeningly from his wound, hot and wet. He lowered his weary head and prayed for the sweet release of death.

Gentle fingers applied the band-aid. “There you are, darling.”

“Thanks Mum.”

- Love The Bad Guy

Trifecta Writing Challenge

“No Regrets”

This post is a response to Friday Fictioneers — I’m branching into a new source of prompt challenges!

The general gist of it, as I can gather, is to write a story of approximately 100 words, inspired by the posted image. That simple.

Hopefully I have the right idea, so please enjoy!

No Regrets

“How do you regret something?”

Simone pulled her gaze away from the sinking sun and turned it inquisitively towards Lachie.

“I mean,” he justified. “It’s regret. But you can’t gret it first, you know?”

She stared blankly for a moment, then snorted in shocked amusement. “Your mind works in mysterious ways,” she teased. Lachie merely grinned in that way she loved and reached over to encompass her hand, caressing the fingers that were so tightly gripped around the armrest.

The plane’s engines whirred to life, and Simone forced her body to relax with the rhythmic vibrations.

“You don’t, do you?” Lachie whispered suddenly, bringing her hand to his lips as he clarified, “You don’t regret it?”

The plane steadily rumbled along the runway and headed for the setting sun.

Simone smiled as Lachie’s lips kissed her newly ringless finger.

“I’d have to gret it first.”

- Love The Bad Guy

FF

“Don’t Wake The Baby”

Time for another Trifextra Challenge:

For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.

I do love me some dialogue-only stories! Follow the link the read the other entries, or read on for my own. Comments are always welcome.

Don’t Wake the Baby

“Carrie?”

“Shhh, you’ll wake Emma.”

“…Come to bed, darlin’.”

“She’s so cute when she sleeps.”

“…You need to rest.”

“Do you want to hold her?”

“Hold what, Carrie? She’s fucking dead!”

“…I know.”

- Love The Bad Guy

Trifecta Writing Challenge

“The Time Thief”

I'm an InMonster!I’m not even sure what this is, readers. I saw the prompt time thief on Inspiration Monday, and I started writing a story… And as seems to be a frequent thing with me, it turned into something else entirely.

So, I hope you like this twisted, uh… Fairy-tale? Nah. Whatever you wanna call it, please enjoy it!

The Time Thief

Grandma used to tell me tales of the Time Thief.

“He’s a wily demon, that Time Thief,” she’d whisper with a wink. “He arrives at the exact moment that you wish he’d stay away.”

“What does he look like, Grandma?” I’d ask every time, just to hear her speak the familiar rasped words.

“Oh, he’s wicked, my dear,” she’d grin, tucking the blankets around my shoulders. “Most horrid, indeed. He has twelve bulging eyes as dark as the night, and just as many fingers, clawed and ugly. But the very worst thing about the Time Thief is that you’ll never know he’s there; he hides himself. His heart beats as loudly as a ticking clock—and that’s all you’ll ever think he is.” Before I shut my eyes, I’d look at the swinging pendulum of the wall clock. To and fro. Seconds pounding past. “By the time you realise the Thief has visited you”—she’d kiss my forehead, and hum the final words—“your time will have already been stolen.”

Time passes, whether thieved or not.

I grew older, and Grandma stopped telling me the Time Thief tales. And then she passed away. I was with her at the end, as she lay pale and sickly in the hospital’s whiteness. She smiled at me, in that mischievously knowing way, and murmured, “He’s gotten greedy. He’s taking it all now.”

The monitor screamed a final, heartless tune.

I knew full-well that she was speaking of the Time Thief, my long-forgotten bedtime story character. I surrendered to a degree of nostalgia and began to tell others his tale. He would crop into conversations in off-handed, subconscious ways: I’d complain to co-workers that he’d stolen my weekend; I’d explain to other passengers that he’d made me miss the earlier bus. “He’s wicked,” I’d nod sagely to complete strangers. “Most horrid, indeed.”

…With hindsight, I can understand why the Time Thief would take an interest in me. I never shut up about him.

It was little things, at first. Things that happen to everybody on occasion. I’d wake up much later than usual; I’d realise I was still working long after my colleagues had gone home. But soon, time was slipping through my fingers all too quickly, too unnaturally. Entire hours would pass in mere minutes. I struggled to eat, to sleep, to work, to live, and I realised, with horrifying clarity, that the Time Thief had sunk his claws into me—all twelve of them—and he had no intention of letting go.

I stopped talking about him after that, hoping he’d divert his attention elsewhere. No such luck. Instead, time flowed ever faster until I was dizzy with the rush of it. Hours became days; days bled into weeks. I’d awaken from a nap and realise entire months had passed me by.

At the age of twenty-eight, I looked into the mirror and was met with the face of a ninety-year-old woman. So much like Grandma… But lacking in mirth. Despair, instead, shadowed my eyes, furrowed my brow, permeated my skin.

Rage hit me, and time was lost once more. I wailed a long and haunting cry and smashed the mirror with my bare hands. It wasn’t enough. I hobbled through the house, seizing each clock, watch and timepiece with withered hands, and dashed them to the floor until they lay in pieces.

All was quiet.

The wall took my weight as I fell back, sliding to the floor. An unfamiliar ache gripped my heart, burned through my chest and along my arm. Blackness crept into the edges of my vision and the impenetrable silence bellowed in my ears.

But then the silence ended.

Distantly, there came a ticking, a steady, mocking drumbeat of time as it marched cruelly onward. But not a clock. Instead, a wily demon, who blinked its twelve eyes and stroked its twelve fingers along my hair as it stole what little time I had left.

The darkness consumed.

The Time Thief had gotten greedy…

- Love The Bad Guy

Pendulum

Gettin’ Published

Hey readers! HEY READERS! Guess what?

I received an email today telling me that I’ll be having two pieces published in Short and Twisted 2013! Woohoo!

Wonderfully, this is not the first time that I’ve been published with Celepene Press. Take a gander at my “Published Works” tab to see my other lil’ successes.

I’ll post links to the stories when the book is released in June.

For now, I shall go pop the champagne!

… And by “champagne”, I mean “milk”.

And by “pop”, I mean “add copious amounts of chocolate topping to“.milk

- Love The Bad Guy

“Quitting For Freedom”

Hello, all! Here’s a response to Week 62 of the Trifecta Challenge, with the word prompt:

MOUTH — something that resembles a mouth especially in affording entrance or exit: as
a : the place where a stream enters a larger body of water
b : the surface opening of an underground cavity
c : the opening of a container
d : an opening in the side of an organ flue pipe

I’m sliding in just under the mark, with a story of 330 words. And I’m actually not 100% sure that I stuck with the third definition, as I’m supposed to. If that’s the case, I won’t be considered as a contest entrant, but hopefully you’ll all enjoy reading it, nonetheless!

Feedback is always welcome.

Quitting for Freedom

Evelyn eyed the smirking mouth of the elevator with the trepidation of a captured sparrow. Gathering her courage, she strode in, pressed the familiar button and watched the doors slide smoothly shut.

No going back.

She was done. She’d had her fill of the clientele’s insolence and telephone’s shrill scream. It was time to live the life she’d always dreamed—footloose and fancy-free.

Ding.

The lift doors opened, and Evelyn emerged with a newfound confidence. Heads peeked over cubicles as she marched down the hallway. Mr Berg’s office awaited. She pondered a dramatic entrance, with slammed doors and flipped chairs, but Evelyn considered herself to be a lady of good form, and so she knocked demurely, pulled her lips into a derisive smile, and entered.

The balding head of Mr Berg remained lowered. Evelyn stood patiently, refusing to speak until she’d been acknowledged. And indeed, Mr Berg did acknowledge her, with a notable double-take that caused his glasses to slide down his nose.

“Evelyn,” he sighed. She pulled her shoulders back, pleased that her displeasure was clear to him.

“Mr Berg,” she said hotly, “I’ve given many years of my life to this company; I’ll give no more. I’m leaving, effective immediately.”

Her boss, she noticed, looked suddenly, immeasurably sad, but she pushed on. “Don’t try and change my mind, sir. I’ve given this a lot of thought, and… And I’m done.”

Those eyes remained fixated on her, deepened by sorrow. Evelyn broke the gaze. “Goodbye, sir. I’ll be back for my things.” And she was gone.

Mr Berg removed his glasses, feeling exhausted. Evelyn wouldn’t come back for her things. She never did.

Instead, she’d return next week—perhaps later, but probably sooner—to quit her job yet again. The staff had become quite accustomed to the sight of the frail eighty-year-old woman rushing past the cubicles.

With a weary sigh, he watched as Evelyn was swallowed by the elevator. She bore the grin of a woman finally freed.

- Love The Bad Guy

Trifecta Writing Challenge